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JOE BALAZ: Charlene

January 16, 2017 Hawaiʻi Review
Artwork: Uncharted Space by Joe Balaz

Artwork: Uncharted Space by Joe Balaz

 

Charlene

 

Charlene
wun wahine wit wun glass eye

studied da bottom
of wun wooden poi bowl

placed in wun bathtub
to float just like wun boat.


Wun mysterious periscope
rising from wun giant menacing fish

appeared upon da scene.

Undahneath da surface
deeper den wun sigh

its huge body
lingered dangerously near da drain.


Wun torpedo laden scream
exploded in da depths

induced by Charlene

who wuz chanting
to da electric moon

stuck up on da ceiling.

Silver scales
wobbled like drunken sailors

and fell into da blue.

No can allow
to move da trip lever on da plunger

no can empty da ocean

no can reveal da dry porcelain ring
to someday be scrubbed clean.


Charlene
looked at all da ancestral lines

ingrained on da bottom of da round canoe
floating on da watah

and she saw her past and future.

Wun curious ear wuz listening

through wun empty glass
placed against da wall

and discovered
dat old songs wuz still being sung

echoing like sonar
off of da telling tiles. 


Joe Balaz writes in Hawaiian Islands Pidgin (Hawai'i Creole English) and American-English. He has also created works in music poetry and visual poetry.

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